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von sunfunlili (DE/GB), 2014-09-06, 14:17   Spam?  

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von Roschi007, 2014-09-06, 15:29   Spam?  195.254.226....

aber die letzte Zeile sollte die drei vorhergehenden beenden und und sich direkt an den Kunden wenden. Ich frage mich ob man die letzte Zeile so stehen lassen kann oder ob es grammatikalisch falsch ist. Und wenn es ja doch so geschrieben werden kann, ob es jemand mit Englisch als Muttersprache merkwürdig finden würde.

Vielen dank für die Hilfe!

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von patrick1a (UN), 2014-09-06, 15:58   Spam?  

thanks guys

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von timfefe (AU/AT), 2014-09-06, 16:17   Spam?  

"To instruct you better" is gramatically ok, and as a statement declaring what your passion/experience/specialization is, does not sound odd either.

To some people, such statement may sound empty (to instruct me better than what??), but many companies, large and small, use such empty statements, so it's quite acceptable.

BTW, if your prospective customers are mainly from the UK/OZ/NZ, I'd replace sepecialization by specialisation. If they come from everywhere around the world, specialization is ok.

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von Lisa4dict loggedout, 2014-09-06, 16:19   Spam?  99.11.162....

You could try "to better instruct you"  
But somehow that immediately made me think of red riding hood. "The better to eat you ...:-)
http://books.google.com/books?id=SlwLAwAAQBAJ&pg=PP1&dq=red...

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von Lllama (GB/AT), 2014-09-06, 16:40   Spam?  

I think to instruct you better does sound odd, but as timfefe says, that's advertising for you. I marginally prefer to teach you better.

A better/superior learning experience ?

Putting you into that sentence makes it a bit long and unwieldy:
my X, my Y, my Z - giving you a better learning/skiing experience ?

I'm not completely convinced :-)

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von Roschi007, 2014-09-06, 18:12   Spam?  195.254.226....